Isolation

Another great poem Kaylee. You really like using the pause. That really gets me thinking. Good job :)

Again, your poems are really good and have matured a lot. Keep on writing!

Not too bad... a bit weak at the ending. I did like the beginning though.

Good job

xDarksuicidex 4.5

Kaylee --
I`m just bored, so commenting on people`s work. =D Hope you don`t mind.

I gave this poem a 4/5 because of the flow and the rhyming. In poetry, as I`m sure you know, flow is very important. I just couldn`t get a secure grasp of flow anywhere in this poem - that part needs some work. But the rhyming also messed me up - only one of your stanzas rhymed. I don`t know if this was an unrhyming poem, and you didn`t realize that you had rhymed- but you did, and it kind of messed me up. I would either make all stanzas rhyme, or make none of them rhyme. Just my opinion. =D

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This one made me feel really uneasy.
The language was strong and I liked that it flowed well too but I don't know what makes me feel uneasy abvout it. sorry :(

I love this poem it is very different!! The flow was there and it left me wanting more and I really understood it! Great job five5

-AnnMarie