I would die.

by Nelle   Aug 1, 2006


It is very hard for me to live without you
You are always there when I need you
You have hurt me a couple of times in the past
But, you have always stood your ground and made it last

You have been broke a couple of times
You have kept me together more then twice
You speed up and get really fast when I'm worried
But, then you slow down really quick when I'm scared.

Sometimes I feel like you are gone
Sometimes I feel like I'm all alone
You're hurting me now as we speak
You're twisting and knotting and making me weak

I would die without your presence
I would die without your assistance
If I lost you I would fall apart
Possibly because you are my heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dyingxpassion

    Like this poem too =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Sometimes I feel like you are gone
    Sometimes I feel like I'm all alone
    You're hurting me now as we speak
    You're twisting and knotting and making me weak

    ^^I really really really liked that stanza. wow. I can relate soooo much in that one!

    Again, you expressed yourself very well. I liked this alot. Cause the way you wrote it, readers are able to interpreate{sp?} it however they like..whether it's about a b/f or family passing..They're able to relate in some way. It's great! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Wow, i dont know what to say... That poem was awesome and actually i didnt expect it to end that way; but i loved it! I had to read it twice to realize that everything made sense, because in the first place i thought you were writing about a boy...lol. I loved it! Keep writing!
    Love,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 17 years ago

    by Nancy

    THis is a very nice poem. Really easy to read and a nice flow to it! Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Hmmm..very interesting...this is pretty unique..all this time i thought you were writting about a person..but wow..an unexpected twist...i liked it!!!Not ur best work but definatly a good peice:):)

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