Silent Tears

by deeplydesturbed   Aug 1, 2006


A tear running away
From my eye
Down my cheek
As i let out a sigh

Not a sound made
Silence in the air
No one around
And no wind in my hair

Silently sitting on my bed
Looking out my window
As the world goes slowly
Silently crying inside

Noone understands
No one listens
No one cares
Why can't they see???

Silent tears
Bring more pain
Than those tears
Which are noticed

some one should see
The trail on my face
The silent tears left
From running away.....

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  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    The tear that ran down your cheek ended up on my lips after reading this I can taste it.
    I can taste how bitter this world becomes for us sometimes.
    Every word you mentioned is true.

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      thank you again Lucifer for reading and commenting on some of my older pieces.

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is so sad but in the same breath it's beautiful

    Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    The imagery here is nearly as painful as the tears. Silent tears show that inside there's a battle going on, like a boiling pot and although this emotion is hot; its being kept contained from the world. However, there are times when visual clues, like tears show like moisture released from a pressure cooker.

    Well done, Naomi. I hope you're okay.

    Michael x

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Michael.
      This was actually one of my first poems on here.. many years old !! But thank you for reading

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Sorry I missed this, this is deep and so very true silent tears are more painful.
    Hugs

  • 7 years ago

    by STEVE

    Great poem i can relate to this 5/5

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