Non-existent World (Captured By A Girl)

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 4, 2006


Deep down somewhere, beneath invisible eyes,
A unstable, emotional heart does lie,
A powerless feeling; creeps up her soul,
By writing her emotions her story is told.

A swirling vortex, twists her mind,
Unaware of her surroundings, shes lost in time,
An evil curse has caught her up fast,
Not eager for a future, forgetting her past.

This crazy useless world, brings her to shame,
The falseness of reality makes her insane,
Powerless, non-existent in a world full of wealth,
Innocent people dieing around her, from ill health.

So what is our reason? our meaning of life,
Who are the people, for whom we should fight,
Another young girl, in a world full of many,
With little answers to life, if at all any.

xx x x x xx if you please please criticize

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  • 17 years ago

    by Heather K Matilda

    Great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by tiffany

    Makes me think, =)

  • 17 years ago

    by cindie

    I really like this poem,it kinda makes me think.but all in all its great!!! :)

    *cindie*

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    A unstable, emotional heart does lye,
    [lie? maybe?]
    People dieing around her, with ill health.
    [dying]

    Very interesting poem.. Not something you read everyday. Great way of explaining yourself... I'm not sure what else to say.. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacob

    Excellent work. Very well written and easy to follow. Great work. 5/5