Can YOU Feel After Death?

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Aug 6, 2006


Death.....

How would it feel, to not be able to feel at all,
No emotions, no love, no warmth in your blood,
To just lie there invisible to not be able to prevent cries,
To have suffered the unbearable pain of ' goin' away ', no one should.

To have cursed life before death is an inevitable fate,
But what would you do if YOU died,
Would you regret life? or how you chose to abuse it?
Would you be able to feel the pain you once had inside?

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostForever

    Its really good, so emotionally. i love it
    xxxxxxxx alexe

  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa

    This poem gave me a whole new perspective on the death. I have never thought of death in this way. It is a very good poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa

    This poem gave me a whole new perspective on the death. I have never thought of death in this way. It is a very good poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by leticia miller

    Your poem mad me think alot about life and in a new way have you ever thought about weather you are alive right know how do you know that you arnt and that you might just be replaying your life up in heaven

  • 17 years ago

    by Kellie

    This is great! it is so deep and meaningful it really got me thinking
    xxxkelliexxx

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