Misty Figures

by Jessica   Aug 22, 2006


Misty figures slowly float in shadows
Endlessly haunting innocent lives with delight
Swooping quickly across old graveyards
Floating effortlessly all through the night..

These pale spirits angrily linger on earth
Flying gracefully through concrete walls
Zooming happily over the big, open sky
Letting out their ghostly high pitched calls..

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  • 12 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    You use the word angrily but then describe them as happy. Such a big contrast with nothing between the too. You may also want to limit words ending in -ly, for some reason they just throw some poems off. The rest of the poem was good though for some of your descriptions.

  • 12 years ago

    by xxbabigrrlxx

    Wow ... everything flowed REALLY well and even though it was short it was a really captivating poem that caught my attention...keep up the good work chica!!!!!!

    *~*xxBaBi_GrrLxx*~*

  • 12 years ago

    by Sophie

    Good work Jessy!

    nice and captivating poem

    lovely work

    sophie:)

  • 12 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very nicely written.. Very dark and sinister; just the way I Love it. You seem to have gotten downrated on this poem -- it's not a 4.5. Just remember you did very well on this poem. The lowest it should have ever gotten was a 4.9. But good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 12 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    I liked this poem dark but well written keep it up 5/5 from me