SHES THE IMAGE OF MY PAIN

by Gizmo   Sep 3, 2006


THERES THIS GIRL I KNOW,
I WISH SHE WAS DEAD,
SHE COMES IN THE NIGHT,
FROM UNDER MY BED.
SHE WAVES THIS RAZORBLADE,
AND SHE CUTS MY ARM,
AND WHEN I WAKE IN THE MORNING,
PEOPLE THINK I SELFHARM.
THIS GIRL SHE DRESSES IN WHITE,
BUT THE BLOOD STAINS HER DRESS,
AND SOMETIMES I HATE HER,
I REALLY MUST CONFESS.
SHE IS THE IMAGE OF PAIN,
AND SHE IS SUICIDAL IN HER HEAD,
SHES THIS GIRL I KNOW,
WHO I WISH I WAS DEAD.
SHES ME, BUT NOT ME.
SHES MY HURT AND MY PAIN,
AND EVERY TIME I GET HURT,
SHE COMES BACK AGAIN.

SHES THE DEMON IN MY HEAD,
THE GIRL UNDER MY BED,
SHES ME IN AN IMAGE OF PAIN,
SHE COMES AND COMES AGAIN.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    Wow really creepy yet i loved it
    something about blood on a white dress
    5/5 keep wrighting

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    I love the picture that you painted in my head. Very powerful and moving poem. I bet a few people can relate to this. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Whoa. Caps. o.o I think you should lowercase the letters, because it's like you're yelling.

    Okay, this wasn't a cliche poem, BUT a lot of the lines were cliche. I love the topic, but I think you could have written it so much better. The flow was definitely off in place, but not [too] bad.

    I can feel where you're coming from. I can definitely relate.

    It was an okay poem.

    Hope I wasn't too harsh. :]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Perfect also very deep poem but that poem was very really nice great job

  • 16 years ago

    by El

    This is a great poem - sad but good!
    It was a gd idea to write about. Great imagery aswell!

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