I Was Your Life

This was a simple poem but really touched my heart.. actually i was amaze with most of your poem most of it were so simple yet really touched directly to the readers heart like this one. great work!!

Why have you done that?
Don't you have a heart too?
Why have you done that?
Didn't you know what it means?
When a person say (I Love you)??

oh my lord, a message that was the greatest.
I wish i wrote this to a person who decieved me once in my life.It is so hard when they can not get what love means. today they tell you I love you and tommorow you'r just a history to them, Exellent job dude, I wonder why you are in my favorite list.

You told me I was your life
How come you just disappear?

wow, I can relate to this, it is so great, could not hold my tears...

I love the word ''was''. Know why? Because.. it shows what used to be, but isn't anymore. It is so strong, such emotion is put to it. Nicely done.. on the poem. Good work.

Awesome poem. I felt the love =)
5/5, love Emma xx