Cold Comfort

by x.Athame.x   Nov 4, 2006


Swirling all around me
Pieces of cold, bitter death
Oh, please come to me now
And take away my breath
So long, now have I wished
For you; take me from within
But life doesn't care for me
And death won't let me in
Every time I think I'm close
Death slams its inviting door
But life doesn't want me
No one does, not anymore
Now I am just left longing
For fate to make up its mind
I'm hoping that day is soon
And cold comfort I will find.

(C) Luna 2006

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  • 12 years ago

    by The Simpsons rule

    Hay! the poem was amazing, it really touched me i can completely relate to this poem!
    Brilliant keep writing
    5/5
    xxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This was awesome. Excellent choice of words and it had a good flow. I love the way it ended, especially the last line. Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Linzii

    Hey I cant really relate to this poem and I hope that if you feel this way your pain is scarce cause it seriously sux!! well comment myne if you wish
    ~Linzii

  • 12 years ago

    by Jennifer Dziak

    Astonishing,.

  • 13 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Perhaps, what I meant to say was: Although it was short, it spoke volumes.

    Jeannie