Does love stop here?

by ShootingStar179   Nov 8, 2006


What do you know?
You are unresponsive when I try to free your soul,
From the bitterness and hatred you show,
After a while you will just lose control,

Kill your fears with the blade you jabbed into my heart,
All I am trying to do is save you,
That is all I have tried from the start,
Is all the love you had gone?

All my words you will not let me say
I came close when no one would come near,
Yet I think when I am pushed away,
Does love stop here?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    A great read! The flow like mentioned above could of worked better, but i still really like it! It was quite sad. But i really liked it! Keep it up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    That was nice. It seemed a little jumpy at times, and didn't really flow as nicely as it could have done, but it was interesting. I enjoyed reading it. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Nice poem :)
    thanks for the comment, and um yes it is true.. this isn't by any chance the courtney i know is it?

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