An eye for an eye.

by ASPHYXIATED   Nov 11, 2006


I wont hide beneath my broken mask,
A smiling disguise just isn't the way,
I dropped my sanity as i ran,
From the horror you granted me that day.
Go on now raise your chin up high,
And take the final day with pride,
You get all you deserve my darling,
This time there is no place to hide.

An eye for an eye as the saying goes,
A heart for a heart is surely fair,
You'll feel the pain I felt that night,
As your skin does rip and tear.
Revenge is such a tasteful word,
Full of hatred and spite,
Oh how amazing is sweet revenge,
So deserving, so perfect, so right.

Now look me in my bitter eyes,
And beg for your sad useless life,
Watch as I hold such dangerous power,
Feel the steel of the sharpened knife.
Shall I fill this room with darkness,
Or watch you gasp for breath,
All that matters now my love,
Is my revenge; Your death.

Don't get heart broken, Get Revenge.
An eye for an eye,
A heart for a heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very nice! i felt it! great write! keep it up!
    God Bless!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Very very powerful peice of write!

    "Revenge is such a tasteful word,
    Full of hatred and spite,
    Oh how amazing is sweet revenge,
    So deserving, so perfect, so right."

    ooo!..i love these lines..the poem as a whole is filled with emotions and the perfect rhyme scheme added to the beauty and intensity of this write!
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Erin

    Wow!! 5/5! i loved it ur very talented check out some of mine if ud like.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The emotion was strong throughout this poem and flowed nicely all your poems are nicely written. The ryhme scheme was great and m sure alot of people can relate to this poem in many different ways seeing as it can be interpreted in so many different ways. Really power poem. Well done~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. That was strong. I could feel the revenge. The only thing I really see that you need to add is the period at the end of the poem. your rhyming was nicely done, i enjoyed this. 5/5.

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