What's Left of Me.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Dec 7, 2006


What's Left of Me.

Her wheels are turning down an old dirt road,
As her tattered young heart continued to erode;
And the tears are streaming down her face,
From baby blue eyes coated in bitter disgrace.

The radio is singing her a lonesome lullaby,
And all of her hopes are held up so high;
But she sits alone with a bag of clothes,
And where she ran off to, nobody knows.

Her hometown fades behind her as she set her eyes ahead,
Shrugging off every promise that you had ever said;
And she smashes her rearview as she reaches Tennessee,
Wiping her tears she mutters "You can't have what's left of me"

© Jenna Elphick
December 7, 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Lol nick lacheys song! i like that song. and i like this poem too! u really made this poem work..the flow was great. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Virna Estella

    The title made me remember nick lachey's song "what's left of me?" Nice title for an equally nice work!

    -virna

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Oh jenna dear. i love you sweety. and im always here for you :)
    now to the poem
    great work.. on ce again you have dragged me in right away. and it aws awsome. and wonderful
    intense.. great work

    -/2 terra

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    I cant put into words how good of a poet you are jenna, all your poems rule, 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    This should be in the "love" section lol. great poem!!!

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