Found Me In You

by *Charisma*   Dec 9, 2006


A void I had is now filled by you
It's not what you said, but all that you do.
Words I craved, but could never find
Fall into my lap, spill from my mind.
Holes I thought would always be
Are sewn to the point no one can see.
Pieces I thought were lost and gone
Have returned to me after so long
In this rush of life, I was lost in the crowd
But by your hand, you guided me out.
The stress of life was taking its toll
But I'm okay. You calmed my soul.
I was missing everything I once knew,
But I found the pieces of me, when I found you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A nice, simple, soothing piece. I particularly liked the lines 'It's not what you said, but all that you do' and 'Fall into my lap, spill from my mind', the latter especially, it was wonderfully worded.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Lovely writing style. strong emotions and image you hae put here. excellent piece of work

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow, so dang powerful. Didn`t expect that ending, at all. Every line in this piece just screams the emotion, I love it.

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 3

    aww.. this is soo cute.. simple but still strong.. the emotion is great and the last line is killer.. another spectacular one

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamica

    Excellent write. I enjoy reading your stuff. Keep it up!