by David Marshall Dec 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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I'm sorry I couldn't hold any longer, |
by Mr Rhee
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The "flow" was just a little broken, but I like broken. Good work. Strong feelings in this write. |
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Powerful, emotional poem. Well written. |
by Cindy
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Good job. The feelings really come through in your words. The flow was also good. |
by Whisper
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That was really good! I really hope you don't hurt yourself though. I love you to death and I hate having you hurting. It's a really good poem though. Love you. |