Wake up and break down

"Just deal, move on,
life waits on no one
Rotting, wasting,
Your disintegrating. "
^ I love that stanza. It's what everyone should do, too bad they can't, eh.

You did an oustanding job with this poem. You used a lot of nice words, which I loved. :D It challenges the readers, and makes them wonder. Poems that do that are usually the best poems.

Keep it up, hun
I think I'll add you to my favorites, and stay caught up with your poems a bit.
<3 Teria.

This was amazing. as is all your poetry. i am beginning to see a trend here. [:

on the more serious side, I really enjoyed how you wrote this. everything flowed wonderfully and the word choice was superb. keep up the amazing writing dear, you'll be famous for it.

Oh. i really love your poetry. you have rhythm!

5/5

This poem was very well written, the words were great and so was the flow excellent job 5/5

Its cute. you used really big words though. lol. uhm it was kind of awakward to read cause like the begining you read differently then the end... but still its really good :D i voted 5 :D