Star Dust and Love

Aww... so cute... the rhyme was great and the flow was good.. strong emotions .. beautiflly written..i really really realy really really really really reeally.. like this poem .. lol =]P

"Love is simple and easy to do
When it comes to me loving you
Days can go by, and tears can fall
But I'll still love you through it all"

I loved these lines. I can totally relate to them right now! Perfect rhyming and flow!
xoxo

Ok, HOW is this getting a 4.1??? lol well anyways, i absolutely LOVED the imagery to this, especially

Flowers will bloom and seasons pass
But you and I will forever last
Withering petals and fallen leaves
Can witness our love eternally
Like the white glitter dust on the stars
I'll be your light no matter how far

astonishing =) i always love reading your poems, as i can see what a true poet is able to write !
5/5

Emilyy-

"Love is simple and easy to do
When it comes to me loving you
Days can go by, and tears can fall
But I'll still love you through it all"

I love those lines the most, at this moment in time i can really relate to them.
I haven't been on for ages either =)
5/5
*Gem*

I agree with Glen-Duh...who is voting here? This is a very sweet love poem, good flow and rhyme. perfect! 5/5