Senses.

by ASPHYXIATED   Jan 5, 2007


A young girl blinded by life,
A tortured soul slaughtered by strife,
She's lost in a maze of regret and lies,
Evil clouds covering once hopeful skies.
A young girl deaf to kind voices,
An aching child betrayed of all choices,
Shes screaming yet no sound is released,
Hearts still pounding, Yet minds deceased.
A young girl numb of all feeling,
A destroyed mind with no chance of healing,
She's right in front of your judging eyes,
Standing invisible, your oblivious to her cries.

©Lisa Westlake.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This poem is absoulty brillant, I really love the word choice, it was amazing, the flow was perfect, the emtion was so powerful, and deep, and the vocab was the best, I think this poem is well written, and you did antoher excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was really simple but amazing at the same time. Really dark amd beautiful the imagery was great and it flowed nicely. Well done on a beautifully dark piece of work.

    Well done ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Lisa, I love your poems. they are just so good!
    The words leave me breathless, the flow is awesome, and the imagery is perfect.
    keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Dark but beautifully insightful poem. Strong imagery with powerful language, excellent work! One of my favorites of yours!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Oh, Lease! This was so beautiful. So sad and intense. I love this! But I love you more!! You're a talented writer!! Grr. Me want it! Please? ;P

    Ily!

    -` TUB

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