Words can kill

by Espoirfailed   Jan 12, 2007


Can't you see
Love is just potential hate?
If you wait
No matter what
Your love will turn
Like a possessed demon.
Light shining
From your hurtful beacon.

And you've killed me
Without even touching me
Your words have done it.
They were enough.
They were more
They were adequate.
And think before
You open your mouth.
Because the weapons that spill out
How they can charm,
But they can harm
Worse still
They can kill.

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  • 18 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Beautiful poem with a great meaning. my fav. line:

    Your love will turn
    Like a possessed demon.

    shows emotion. thx for the comments on my poems. it really means a lot to me. keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    What a poem. Its definetly a thin line between love and hate. no doubt.
    the right words at the wrong time
    well you know the rest.

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    Wow. this is wonderful. the second stanza was the best. love it. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by b r i d g e t

    Wow this poem is very strong n deep i know exactly what u mean by love just turns to hate u have talent girl thank u so much for ure coments on my poem it means the world to mean
    keep up the good writing x

  • 18 years ago

    by ..::Angel of your darkness::..

    First, thank you for the comment you left on my poem.
    I'm glad I chose to read this one because at this moment in time, I can completely relate and i love how it's not been done in the same style poems are normally done if you get me and i like the idea of what you're writing about, so you get a 5! well done and keep it up!

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