The Game Of Hopes

I really liked this poem. I loved the last stanza. It was all very nicely put. Great read.

marcella

At some places I found the flow to be a bit rocky, but that's only minor, I liked the third stanza best, I can relate to that so much. Another great poem. =]

Tammie

Well it has been some time since I have written, and my ear maybe abit rusty. These hopes and dreams really have no true destination, it just stops it never shows the passions of what you long for it never shows how they are actually are haulted by another person, you just have to use your imagination. This maybe good for those that like to fill in the blanks like some mad lib but, I think if your moved to write on a subject you should write it clear enough so some one can walk away with the idea. Just a thought. Robert....

Great job on your poem. My favorite part was the last stanza.
Whenever I see you,
Everything stops.
This is,
The game of my hopes.
Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

Very nicely written just like all of your works. I do however wish this one was a bit longer, I was just getting into it when it ended. The flow was good as well as the structure. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe