Cut

by The Queen of Spades   Jan 15, 2007


In blinding tears
Lock the door
Shutting away the hurt
Shunning away the redemption
Turn on the angry sound
To match emotions
To conceal the painful truth
Knucles a pasty white
From gripping the sharp edge
Open the window
Invisible light pours in
Sit down quickly
Trembling uncontrollably
As the silver blade is raised
Slicing the air
Before it greets the flesh
The skin succumbs
A veteran to its punishment
As crimson slides slowly
Fascination with claret color
A dark, beautiful red
As the initial sting subsides
Tranquility returns
Watching the stained knife
Gleam in the sun
Such a pacific storm.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow!!!! EXCELLENT! i like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is a great poem!! it flows really well, and the imagery is AMAZING!!!!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    That was brillent! Really, I loved it!!! Well done!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Very original.. i like this poem alot.. strong emotion and nice flow... great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really liked to read,so good honey,keep writing,good job 5/5