Sun Vs Moon (Diamante)

by Gem   Jan 15, 2007


..........................Sun..........................
..................Burning, Blazing..................
...........Scorching. Glowing, Sizzling...........
.......Warming, Sultry, Serene, Cool....
...........Tranquil, Soothing, Restful.......
..................Relaxing, Quiet..................
..........................Moon.......................... ©

*Gem*

Diamante- A Diamante is a seven-lined contrast poem set up in a diamond shape. The lines go as follows...

Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subject
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subject
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subject, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject

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  • 5 years ago

    by Kalista Kupfer

    This was a great poem it was the best short poem i have read in my life lol, plus it was way better than mine..

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A very creative piece, filled with bursting imagery, nice job Gem! This was a stunning read for me and you mastered this form, keep it up!

    Take care and God Bless!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Very creative. I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. Bravo!!

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Strong, interesting.

    lisa

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea Campbell

    I love it!! great job!!

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