Savour The Feeling

by Gem   Jan 16, 2007


The heavenly warmness fills my body
The smoothness is like a warm caress
The wonderful taste tingles my tongue
My next emotion is anyone's guess

I lean back to savour the feeling
As the tender warmth comforts me
I deeply inhale the gorgeous scent
Just how beautiful can this be?

This sense of peace is so calming and pleasant
This flavour is simply out of this world
I can't get enough of this snug tranquillity
I must be one of the luckiest girls

So after all of these things I've said
I bet you're wondering how to feel this way
A cup of hot chocolate is all you need
'Nestle' make all your troubles go away ©

*Gem*

(Nestle Hot Chocolate is the best thing in the world!! =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    LOL This was great... I love hot chocolate but my fave is cadbury's. You described the feeling of drinking it superbly and I had no idea what You were talking about until the last stanza.
    The rhythmn and flow were excellent once again, well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow that was so so funny. you are really creative for stuff to write about. 5/5 of course since there is no higher i can give you.

    xx.chelsea.xx

    ps. thanks for the sweeet comment gem. yes i am lucky and for that poem i didn't think it did matter so I decided to write it with out rhyming. how are you doing hun?

  • 17 years ago

    by supratim

    Lord
    so funny... ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ....

    i will collapse now!!!

    keep the good worh

    ha ha ha ha ha a a

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    LOL!!! hot chocolate rocks! haha .. very cute poem.. nice flow as well

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #4:

    This is SO funny b/c all the stanzas except the last one actually sound romantic, lol!!! I mean talking about snuggling and all that...and it's warm caress, heehee. You did really good! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

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