Always Loving Him

by Tricky Daze   Jan 20, 2007


As my tears drops by
The loneliness of you
I passed many days by
Just seeing your silhouette
Or thinking about you

I can't carry on
Without your heart loving me
Without your hands on me
No I can't breath
And i don't know what to do
You're so precious
But nobody is supporting me
For You

Hold me tight and look into my eyes
As I'm seeing the sparks in you
I can't take it,let this go
Nobody is more important than you
Take me far away,let's go

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To:My Worthy Sweetie
Please Let me Know What You Think About This(rate or comment),I'll do the same for you
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  • 18 years ago

    by amoxi

    It was deep and heartfelt i liked it keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    Short and sweet, but it also feels almost sad....I liked it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    This made me smile.
    I loved it.
    You did an amazing job on it. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Ah, this is beautiful. Straight from the heart and packed with emotion. A beautiful love poem that honestly does touch the heart. I particularly liked these lines:

    I can't carry on
    Without your heart loving me
    Without your hands on me
    No I can't breath

    Again, amazing job on this piece. *5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by aisyned

    GOODJOB!thanks for commenting my poem!

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