A Letter to Jake

by The Queen of Spades   Jan 26, 2007


Why...don't you love me?
Why, do you hurt me?
I give you my all
My word, my oath, my soul
And you give me everything
Just not what I want...not what I need
Please, just--
Hold me,
Touch me,
Hug me,
Feel me
Look beyond my body, my face
And gaze into my heart
With me forever, you're safe
Can't you see...it's beautiful
It's glorious
It's so utterly real
I need you
I love you
Please, don't be afraid
I will never hurt you
So hold my hand, and please,
Just love me.

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  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Sorry i took so long to comment. this is a really emotional poem but i liked it .

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovelon Rules

    I mean this poem is lovely and heartfelt though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovelon Rules

    It's funny how such a simple poem can grab so much attention!

  • 16 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    Well done..nice work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent, so full of passion and love. The flow was great and the style was nice. Great job.

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