4ever you said

by Loved In Hell   Jan 28, 2007


You said 4ever
But I knew it wouldn't last
You said I love you
No more living in the past

You said 4ever
You said call anytime
But last time I called
I realized you were not really mine

You said 4ever
That there would be no doubt
But the first thing you did
Was a deafening shout

You said 4ever
You would never hurt me
Physically emotionally
But that night I cried a sea

You 4ever
You'd never do it again
After a week or so
You were back to avenge

Now I sit in my room
Fearing my life
Last time you came
You came with a knife

Now its my turn
To say 4ever
And now
I can actually say never

I uncovered my eyes
I said no more
Never come again
4ever a lock on my door

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the ending! You wrote with such power and determination. Never left someone else have control over your life or else you'll be left broken. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved this whole piece. i loved the concept of it, the words you use. it was a delight to read this. great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Amazing poem! can relate to it. Keep up the good work! you have talent. Like that poem a lot!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! That was a really great poem. Excellent job!

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