The Gaurdian

by Loved In Hell   Dec 27, 2007

( this is something i wrote and something i am working on is going to be a short book, there is so much more to the backround of this page so this is just a small insight of my book please tell me what you all think)

Alone in the dark sadness, sobbing becomes unbearably loud. Tears begin to overflow onto the floor.

Suddenly a knock, an open window, a secret, the nights angel appears. She runs to the creatures open arms. She takes flight like the wind, the stars floating next to her. His arms so incredibly warm. The midnights air, a cool kiss to the face. She looks into his eyes all sorrows dissapear. She felt his warm strong body as she clung to him. She felt the touch on her soul. Never wanting to wake from this beautiful dream. Above the waters floating with the clouds she suddenly feels free.

Larde clouds begin to roll in a storm comes as her dark angel struggles with the wind and fights the lightening. A cry rumbles in his throat, agony and hurt sounds through the storm as she slips and falls out of his grip into the sea, falling under the currents. All she can do is take her last breath and whisper "thank you". She bids farewell slipping slowly loosing sight of the stars and moon letting darkness fill her vision.

Morning comes, warming the world, but there on the sandy shore ahe lay, sold and rigid. Not even the rays of the sun can touch her frozen body. Her mangled corpse no one dare touch. Everyone merely stares in wonder where once was a beutiful young girl now torn broken and bruised before them lay. Still, no matter the suffering, or the pained death, a warm smile lay on her face. The same as the one she wore just the previous night before. The same one she said thank you with before the cold waters took her life.
(special thanks to her Dark Angel)


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  • 12 years ago

    by neverisme

    Ok gr8 work keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    As has been said you are an amazing writter. I found myself to to spellbound by the imagery, poetic wording, and storyline while reading this outstanding piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Everything was so strong and truthful.
    I like your choice of words.
    And the emotion was captured very well.
    your an amazing poet. :]
    great write. 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem was really interesting and brilliantly written ^^
    Great job XD

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Reaper

    Hey this is great!!! Is there anything yoiu write that isn't great. I love the way you express the emotions. The words flow together perfectly. A wonderful writing. Keep it up. One question....What is the insperation for this writing? Send a PM.....5/5 form me...


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