This life
by Loved In Hell Feb 3, 2008
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Can't stop pretending living in my own fantasy of a world, surreal beauty imagination has overcome reality I'm lost again, lost in this made-up world I call home. No one try to find me, (shh) it's a secret no one will dare enter my mind to try to rescue me from my thoughts. As I stand still the battle rages on inside fighting for my freedom, unreal freedom, a freedom with chains holding me back. There is no such thing as freedom so why return to reality when all it will do is cause physical and emotional pain. Why can't I stay lost in my mind no one will ever find me there for that I am certain. |
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14 years ago
by Jay Perry Jr
Very good i can relate alittle to this poem
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15 years ago
This reminds me of myself and how I wrote a lot when I started writing.
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15 years ago
This poem reminds me of my ex who is the image of my avatar
I seems that when she is behind bars she is more free from her worst enemy I somehow doubt she could see the truth that is expressed well in this poem,
especially this line "freedom with chains holding me back. There is no such thing as freedom so why return to reality when all it will do is cause physical and emotional pain"
whether it is an addict chained to an addiction or trying to escape an addiction this poem reflects the illusion being captured by a desire to be free
well done
ps... there is a way to use emotional pain thus gaining more control by surrender -
16 years ago
by JEFF
Way different from what I'm use to. but the story kep me intrigued and want more. great write =) 5/5
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16 years ago
by TheRapture03
That was really good. It has alot of good imagry, and the words you chose were strong and powerful. good job 5/5
