I love the power of your pain and despair.
i can feel the pain as i read the poem
i can see the hate and need of this feeling
i love it
11 years ago
Truely beautiful poem, it was delicate way of expressing pain. Very dark and gave remnaces of Edgar A Poe. dont know if that was intenional or not, but it was beautiful. I hold sympathy for you, i know what its like to feel like no one is there. Remember these words if you take nothing else from me has a person. No one is meant to suffer forever, we are all meant to be happy. Always drive on and always work for your own satisfaction first.