Gone

by x.Athame.x   Feb 8, 2007


Images in my eyes
Stories of our lives
Trickle down the wall
Ignoring reality's call

In a distant place
With no time or space
Only gentle memories
What a painful tease

Making me think
That in just one blink
I could maybe return
Have; for which I yearn

Have no more wishing
Have no more missing
To attain my desire
Put out this fierce fire

Burning in my heart
It is tearing me apart
All those times are gone
And it feels so wrong

(C) Athame '07

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  • 15 years ago

    by mane

    Nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    "Burning in my heart
    It is tearing me apart
    All those times are gone
    And it feels so wrong"

    This is so sad. Very touching poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow. everything in this poem was wonderfu. however, i felt that there was no story; your words just captivated me to such a degree.

    wow. amazing work, eekp up the great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, I thought it was beautifully written.
    I enjoyed the imagery and wording and I thought it flowed very well.
    You did a wonderful job with this.

  • 18 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Oh this is so beautiful. i love all your work. you have a great talent... well done =)
    p.s. the rhyming in this poem works so well

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