Save Me

by Tricky Daze   Feb 13, 2007


No one can help me,nobody can hear my voice
Nobody can take me away from this life
I took refuge of it,but now no place to hide
Save me from myself,save me from what i have done

First i let it be in me,but later i understood
I can't breathe with it,i got to pray for myself
All the things that i did,i must have an excuse for myself
No return from this way,no way that existed

At that time everybody got me wrong
No one talked or let my heart to sing its song
Even my mother slapped me,after she cried very long
The drug that i let in had my life ruin

Later that i thought of two solution,let it be the beginning
Let it be the end,of what ended up my life
I would end it up and let a long breath
It was the right answer,it was a new start

I was decisive and i went to
The place where i did my mistake
It was a mistake for you to be life
I said,and i was done

What i thought was the real mistake
I can't take it,how could a daughter
How could a daughter make her dad's life ended
I suffocate in pain,yeah i got nothing in my life added

I know he did everything to me,he was the drug
That ruined myself,he screwed me
Even i begged him to stop
But now i know i still have his heart with me

Now got no more tears to cry,no faith to trust
That my life could change,with fate could write
There is just a thing i wrote,as i cut my wrist
Save me from myself,save me from what i have done

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  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    That was really sad, i hope it not from personal experience. It had a really nice flow to it and it was really unique. i liked it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by MyDevotion

    I was surprized when it starting flowing so nicely and its got a nice point! i love it! =) thank you for my comment by the way =) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Good write! A lot of emotion in this one. Altough, it didn't too well in some parts. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    I thought this was a great poem but i got kind of confused but that was prolly just me for i just woke up lol but it was good keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    It was good, but i didn't really get it. it wasn't clear as to what was happening. the flow was a little off too, i had to reread in some places... just look over it again, it was a good write though