I Lost You

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Feb 17, 2007


*Okay, I had a dream like this early this morning, and I was seriously crying in my sleep because it was so real. I had to get it out. Tell me how you felt about this poem! It's about car accident if you didn't really realize what I was saying.*

The memory of you holding me,
Was still in my mind,
Next thing,
You weren't there anymore.

There was a sound,
Like metal against metal,
Tires screeching,
Then dead silence.

I look out the door,
The one you had left your precious hand prints,
See your truck,
In a total mess.

Between two cars,
Your truck was just a mess,
My breath taken,
My heart stopping.

Running to you,
Felt like slow motion,
Felt like years,
Felt so far away.

Coming on the drivers side door,
I couldn't recognize your face,
Trying to open your door,
Took all my strength.

Blood dripping down your face,
Splattered on the broken windshield,
Glass stuck to your face,
Your breathing slowly fading.

I try to carry you to the ground,
With your blood on my clothes,
Your cologne isn't there anymore,
Your love is gone.

Standing in a crowd,
No one called for help,
They're just watching me,
Hold you so close,

I hold you close to my chest,
Whispering in your ear,
"Just hold on, I can't live without you,
Baby just hold on for me please."

My world crashed,
My heart stopped,
Tears are lost in with your blood,
I lost you.

You were my everything,
The one who helped me through the tough times,
You meant so much to me,
You were my boyfriend but yet my best friend.

As you just quietly slipped away in my arms,
With memories rushing through my head,
I could not tell them,
The pain I felt when

I
Lost
You.

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  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow this poem was amazing and so well written i could see it all in my head as i was reading it, it brought tears to my eyes it was fantastic i loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Wow scary dream great poem tho. Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by just a little girl

    I hate it when our dreams show us our worst nightmares, and yet we can't wake up from a dream and while it's happening, we don't know that it's not real. sorry I'm rambling, I had a horrible dream that I wrote a poem about, called through the alleyway if you wanna check it out.

    annnnnyways, i loved the great description you put into it, so sad i was almost crying whilst reading it, if a poem evokes that much emotion in someone then you know that its a good one 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Russell Dawson

    Very vivid!

    One or two little typo's but you write with a great sense of tone and rhytym without lapsing into cliche.

    It's funny that this comes from a dream because I wrote one after waking up from a dream too:

    http://www.helium.com/tm/103829/

    Mine is unfinished but I wrote down everything that came to me in the dream.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Awww. See your truck,--it should say seeing, it sounds better.

    i hate how mightmares can feel so real like that. i hope its still not bugging you.

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