Aphrodite's Spell

by Tricky Daze   Feb 18, 2007


I wish I had said,I wasn't accidentally blinded by you
It wasn't your mistake honey,you weren't to blame
There wasn't love in me before you,no hope to do
It mixed my everything up,the Aphrodite's spell

It takes a worry,gives a little glory to your mind
You don't understand what you do under that thing love
When you got that feeling,nowhere to go nowhere to hide
I had good life before it ruined it completely,the Aphrodite's spell

There was a misunderstood that the words i used
My heart's getting out of my chest when i see him
So hopeless cus it's impossible i get so confused
I can't mean it even if i say by,the Aphrodite's spell

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    The flow was quite broken but i really felt the emotion. congrats

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    The flow was off but another great great great poem by you. you have amazing talent keep at it

  • 17 years ago

    by ryeann

    This was wonderful :) it has left me thinking about so much

  • 17 years ago

    by just a little girl

    "So hopeless cus it's impossible i get so confused"

    the words in the poem were good, however could you maybe change that to full english, 'cause instead of cus. and I felt that the flow of the poem could do with some work, but overall very good

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This was a beautiful poem and well written it really gets the point across i really liked it 5/5

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