by Finalgravedigger Mar 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Little girl |
by Danni
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Aww i really liked that... i can relate to it... thanks for the comment! |
by jello
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Wow this was good. 5/5. thank you for the comment :) |
by MaSkEdSoUl
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Lol I kinda found this funny I have no idea why. Anyways in my opinion I thought you used little girl too much but other than that I found it a pretty good poem! Keep writing! 5/5 |
by Sara
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That was reallly good!!...5/5 from me, and thanks for the comment... yeah moving on is the best thing... but my ex is my twin brothers bff, so it will be kinda ackward.. but he like still talks to me and stuff.. its just that we broke up out of nowhere... so idk im fine now tho, it happened on saturday?.. so ive had time to think, and hes talked to me.. i wrote that poem right after, but never got a chnce to type it on here haha |
by Ashley
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You know from other things i have red of your ...i kinda though you could of done better....it was ok |