Magical Place - Kyrielle Sonnet

by Gem   Mar 8, 2007


In a magical place far far away
Where fairies, pixies and unicorns play
The mermaids are beneath the sea
The show us how wonderful life can be

The leprechauns dwell where there's a rainbow
The colors creating a beautiful show
The birds peek out from the tops of trees
The show us how wonderful like can be

The flowers are tended with such love and care
The sunlight shines on the unicorn's hair
The elves rejoice feeling blissful and free
The show us how wonderful life can be

In a magical place far far away
The show us how wonderful life can be ©

*Gem*

This sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet).
Just like the traditional, this sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a
refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning
of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending
couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jay jay

    Innocecent poem you got here keep on writng! 5/5 good work

  • 17 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Love it...it was a good poem for anyone to read while going through a dark time. Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Excellent form! Beautifully done! I love magical places!! Good imagery! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Very nice, very talented, thAt would explain all the shiney awards, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Sometimes ones own world can protect you from the outside :) love this poem made me smile :) and yeah i knew you'd recodnice the stanzas :) i sent you an email explaining the whole poem did you get it?! and 5/5 for this one :)