Still Waiting

by Tricky Daze   Mar 22, 2007


Everyday reminding you
With ache and pain on my chest
I'm bruised for anything to do
Still aching,still waiting to nest

Still taking the time,you should have arrived here
'No I can't really believe yet I haven't seen
Maybe he was late to wear
Still counting,still here I've been

Still waiting with a bouquet of red roses
They're dried just like my soul
This is the second spring nature snoozes
Still broken,still sole

Still wearing that white dress you bought and hoping
To see you after that bunch of years
The heart of me into million pieces now sweeping
Still crying,still into fears

The visitors have already left this place
With a ruined dress and a sad smile
Looking over the past I need to face
But I'm still loving you,still your bride

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Everyday reminding you
    With ache and pain on my chest
    I'm bruised for anything to do
    Still aching,still waiting to nest

    This lines have the real feelings and desire of your heart. I wish if I can help you Laura.

    This one is with hidden meanings and its in your stomach...but its very cute...5/5 honestly.
    Keep :D

    With Love
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Aww wow that was soo sad! soo much emotion..its your way with words again! its awesome! i think ive read this 1 before, can't believe i didn't r/r/c it before! =o
    nuff luv x =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Still waiting with a bouquet of red roses
    They're dried just like my soul"

    That couplet was my fave by far.. the imagery and the metaphors were perfect..
    The whole concept of this poem was excellent, i never saw the ending coming.
    Well done =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I really love the detail and the imagery in this poem, there's something about the way this is written, i cant describe it but its amzing, i always try to write like this but it never works, i think i came close in my latest poem but nothing as good as this, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awww how sad!! seriously your poems speak to me lol as wierd as that may sound, instead of hearing my own voice in my head when i read it i hear this mystical voice. its strange. good write!! love the work, just ashame its so sad lol

    Luv Lucy

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