Dreams Can Be Real

by The Queen of Spades   Mar 30, 2007


If I couldn't find the dream
Inside your bright, hazel eyes
I'd be lost without a map
Broken in spirit, small in size

If I couldn't taste your tears
So warm in their saltiness
Forever confused I would feel
Wrapped in a shell of loneliness

If I couldn't be held by you
I'd be sans shelter, in the cold
I might never find my voice and
Just simply do what I'm told

If I couldn't feel your love
Black as night, my heart would be
Fortunately there's a light
Guiding you so close to me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was really really good. You are talented, such a show of emtion. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Wow i really liked this poem it was quite sweet and amazingly written. The flow was great and the meaning heartfelt. Well done ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this is so cute!! I remember what this love felt like and it's wonderful...you did a great job expressing your love!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    Wow again, that was amazing. The description is beautifully written and something i can relate to very much. I absolutely love how you said "If I couldn't taste your tears
    So warm in their saltiness
    Forever confused I would feel
    Wrapped in a shell of loneliness"
    lol thats nice. Gave me a newpoint of view I suppose. wow again 5/5 great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Wonderful poem. The emotion was clear and flow was excellent.
    Beatufully poem. 5/5

    :Sarah:

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