by Finalgravedigger Apr 2, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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Oh tree, what do you see? |
by Debbie
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This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Its simplicity and pureness in tone make it enjoyable to read, not to mention that it seems objective in manner and yet at the same time a tinge of something personal as well. :) |
by MaSkEdSoUl
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Wow that was very deep. Very unique. Great flow. |
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I don't want to sound like everyone else so I am trying to think of a way to say it. You tie the tree so well with EVERYONE'S life in general, yet it still sounds like it is just for you. Your poem is very well put. Marvelous job. |
by Rachel RTVW
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Very insightful and unique. I too would seperate into stanzas for presentations sake. The flow was good and the piece was thought provoking. Nice job. |
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Wow that is an amazing poem! mine is like nothing compared to yours! o and thnx for the comment! |