Wondering*

by lost in lovee   Apr 9, 2007


I pass by everyday,
Just to see your face.
Wondering if you notice me,
You make my heart race.

I live for your smile,
I'd die for your touch.
Wondering would you even care,
If I told you I love you so much.

I've been through so much heart break.
None of it was fun.
Wondering if you'd be different.
Just hoping you'll be the one.

Your voice makes me smile;
Though it's not often heard.
Wondering whens the next time I'm going to talk to you,
I'll cherish every word.

Wondering if you think of me;
And everything we could be.
I'm just laying here
Still wondering...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So sweet and deep...I liked the rhyme and wording
    Especially those were cool

    I've been through so much heart break,
    none of it was fun,
    wondering if you'd be different,
    just hoping you'll be the one.

    Keep it up
    Have a nice day
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Good poem. The flow was off a bit. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this.
    Keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Carmen

    Wow.... thats so sweet. im sure so many people could relate to this poem. i liked the rhyming, especially the second stanza. the "live" and "die" comparison was absolutely beautiful. great job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Wow that is a very good poem. I love the way it rhymes...5/5 keep it up.

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