Fly

This poem is really great. It cheered me up! lol thanks so much! keep writing please!!!

This poem flies into the skies of creativity and skill! I loved this poem.
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Oh I loved this piece. Very charismatic but also, I associated it with the death of someone, and their freedom at no longer being in pain yet this is tinged with sadness.

An excellent read!

Oh I loved this piece. Very charismatic but also, I associated it with the death of someone, and their freedom at no longer being in pain yet this is tinged with sadness.

An excellent read!

"Fly upon the gently breeze" (sic) (= Did you mean gently or gentle? If it's gentle, I remember you made this mistake in the past. Otherwise, my bad. lol.)

"Always remember, your not alone" (sic) (= You're is mispelled here.)

"Fly, fly. Your finally free" (sic) (= You're is mispelled here, again.)

I believe this piece can be interpreted in different ways. But this is simply beautiful, as always; it uplifts one's troubled soul through reading it. It shows how everything won't end when times get rough, but how everything gets better and better as you grow up and learn things in life.
Wonderful work, as always, Gem! :D
Thanks for sharing.
Love,
Debbie

P.S. This is my new account now. The mods suddenly suspended mine. *sighs* Oh, well, take care hun!