The sad Song

by The Poetic Child   Apr 22, 2007


Look at this kid as he walks all alone
tears on his bed in his broken home
his princess kicked him out, left the throne
now he has nothing to even call his own

That kid is me I sit here with pain in my chest
got me grabbing my skin, I'm just so stressed
thinking about how this girl got me all depressed
Thinking about the good times, before she left

I felt like it was love, had me thinking of her all day
Felt so much for her, more then what words I can say
Now that shes out of my life, my world went gray
I'm at the end of my roof, I'm going to leave today

Police rack up in front of my house sirens sound
I just want to jump off this roof, land on the ground
I saw her in the crowd, and then I got a huge frown
the crowd comes up closes and then starts to surround

I called her on the phone she picked it up slow
I told her, "baby i just never wanted you to go"
"I love you way more then you could even know"
"Hurts to even know that I was going to propose"...

*jump*
*crowd screams*
*sirens*

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxAllia RaynexX

    A truly beautiful poem. The first stanza is amazing. The best poem I've read all day. You are truly a poet. 5/5

    Allia
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    Check out my poems!!! Thanks a bundle!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Wow!! that was really heart wrenching! Full of emotion also. 5/5.. Keep writing!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Denise

    Hey!
    i wrote some new poems over the time ive been in hawaii,
    nice one,
    whos it about..

    GO COMMENT MINE

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    **Look at this kid as he walks all alone
    tears on his bed in his broken home
    his princess kicked him out, left the throne
    now he has nothing to even call his own**

    wow thats amazing. love that line, its so powerful.

    what happened why are thers sirens?

    **I called her on the phone she picked it up slow
    I told her, "baby i just never wanted you to go"
    "I love you way more then you could even know"
    "Hurts to even know that I was going to propose". **

    you dont need all the "" just before baby and affter purpose...theres too many kinda makes it confusing. but great job very touching.

    melissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Perfection

    Great work with this one... The ending two lines were genious... To me this was flaweless so I can't really give you any constructive critisism ... For Now..

    haha good work man

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