X Give Yourself Away

Other than a typo the structure of this poem, is very well written, the flow is perfect. I loved this. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Great inspirational poem although there were some gramatical errors:

Thriw away your future plans
should be
Throw away your future plans

I think punctuations always good but other then that nice poem

I really enjoyed this poem, it had a very strong and empowering message and was written really well. I liked how you capitalized your words to exemplify a point. Good job! 5/5

~jas~

This is really good also your a good writer :D