What You Never Knew of Love

by The Queen of Spades   Apr 25, 2007


A black hole like a sun
An empy space devoid of life
Sanity holding on by a tearing thread
An interminable wheel of torment
Tears in an ever-salty ocean
Pain wrapped with bloody needles
Trembling arms like earth cracking
A valley full of nothingness
Blood-shot eyes breaking at the seams
Hot darts of fire coursing through veins
Deafening echo of tortured sobs
Cries of misery
Twinge of captured hurt
All in a day's work
All in a single heart
All in a moment of love

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I really liked it. It's different. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Not bad, really.. I liked it alot.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Loved the vocab in this poem it made what you were saying very powerful and strong, Great emotions throughout this. Very well written. Well done on this peice of poetry. 5/5~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Oh wow....this is very powerful. I love it, it had great flow, love the choice of words and very well written. Excellent 5/5