Solemn Flowers.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Apr 29, 2007


Beneath the city lights, a serene tear shines,
As she curses herself for ignoring the signs,
Tracing the laughter lines beside her bright eyes -
She holds the solemn flowers and softly sighs.

A tear falls down onto the bare hardwood floor,
As she looks to the cross where you silently swore,
Your wedding vows, twenty long years ago;
And outside, the golden stars are faintly aglow -

But she holds her hands up to the charcoal sky,
Shaking, as she remembers all of your petty lies,
And her heart, it sinks to her feet, crumbling in agony,
As she screams: "How could he do this to me?"

But in her aging hands, she holds on tight -
To the solemn flowers, roses - black and white,
And in her vivid blue eyes, the world still turns,
Masking her sincerity, her lesson is learned.

-Jenna Elphick
April 29, 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    And in her vivid blue eyes, the world still turns,
    Masking her sincerity, her lesson is learned.
    Excellent poem, very nice flow and it was a heartfelt poem great job,love your style ~~5/5
    thanks for sharing your friend Tracy

  • 16 years ago

    by Crack

    Goodpoem. if i could spell i would critize all ur spelling misttakes too ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I don't like this
    As much as the others you have written.
    This has no mystery in it.
    There's no subtle meaning,
    Unless there's nothing I can see.
    So for that.
    I will give you a 4/5 :]

  • 17 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    WOW... another amazing write!
    <3