Sweet suicide (Not even five reasons to live)

by isabel   Apr 30, 2007


Takes life away, sweet suicide
Erases all the pain inside
In her tears, she seems to drown
Once again, blood draws a crown

A crown for you, sweet suicide
Only you stay, when pushed aside
A lonely poet and almost dead
Still cries alone, for what he said

Awake the feeling, sweet suicide
She's not able to run and hide
The poetry keeps her alive
Reasons to live, won't give you five

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  • 16 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    The flow wuzz amizing ur an amizing poet keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    a beautiful poem, easy to read and the flow was good, it was very touching =)
    good work!
    5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful work dear!...very beautiful and touching!...short though but it showed the emotions in a powerful manner!.
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    This is definitely a short poem, but I would like to say that you should never let someone else make you feel this way. You need to rise against criticism and never hang your head low. I've noticed this same idea in a lot of your poems, and it makes my heart sad. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Ah so far this is your best poem in my opinion. it was short yet straight to the point. description and hurt was clearly evident.

    5/5 David

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