Completely Bruised

It was done for my contest and it made you win because this lines really got me speechless

Filled with salt from oceans I've cried
Stinging my soul, burning what's left
Like a fire consuming my last breath.
You've taken all but my very skin
Let me go, I've lost. You win.

Quiet good expressions
Good job,
Laura

That is so beautiful Girl! My fav lines are these... No cuts or blood though I know I've bled
My open wounds are deep inside
Filled with salt from oceans I've cried
Those were the most touching...great, great, great job! :) 5/5 for sure!
~Midnight Sun

Wow, Dear, for a short poem that was quite impressive, I must say.
=]
I always like to pick a favorite line,
But I'd be picking the whole poem lol.
Anyways, I was left speechless from this,
and I really don't know what to say,
this just had an effect, it was powerful.

"But I've only got a heart tattered to shreds
No cuts or blood though I know I've bled"

^^ GREAT imagery in those lines,
=]

5.5

Sad, but amazing... i'd say much more about it, but it fits in one single word: perfect
=)
100/5 (if i could...)

*isabel*