Among the ashes

by isabel   May 5, 2007


Along the graveyard, I walk
Only to myself, I talk
Seeing the faces of the dead
A naked pain, that's what I said

Haunted by the ones who hide
Hidden thoughts of suicide
Among the ashes, a warm place
Here, I'll never see your face

You won't hear me call your name
Things will never be the same
I am blinded by the pain
Among the ashes, I remain

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Really really well written, i like your style, and the emtion once again shines though, powerful, and the word choice perfect. again well done on such a dark poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    For someone who has only recently started writing poems in english your poems are well structured, imaginative and full of emotion

    Cant get better than that
    Elise

  • 16 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Im the 1 one to coment!
    uau!
    let me enjoy the moment
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    feels nice...

    anyway, why do ya always talk on suicide, dont be sellfish (?) there is also HOMICYDE!!!

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