Six Thousand Miles

by Goran Rahim   May 7, 2007


You,
The girl,
Who I couldn't live without.
The girl,
Who couldn't be a foot away from me.
Now you are Six thousand miles faraway.

Remember once you told me,
"If you got away a mile
I cannot live without you,
There is no way."

The other day,
I saw an old classmate.

When she asked
Where is she?
I responded with tears,
She said,
"I wish I could help, but
Your tears are telling me
It is too late."

Since you have left
Every second
I feel lonely in this city.

Because,
Every street reminds me
Of our love.
Yet, you left
Without pity.

The other night,
I wanted to send you an email
To tell you
I have tried, but cannot forget you.

Then I remembered,
You are
Six thousand miles away.
When you don't care,
Then
Why should I bother you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    So sweet this one is true great thought and feeling were in this poem
    thank you
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was amazingly written.. The emotion was so strong as always in your poems and i cant say that enough. I truely found this to be superb and i really dont know what else to say to this as it just blew me away. Well done with this i truely enjoyed reading this and your others. Well done~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlie

    This a great poem..you are one of my favorite authors...and i love reading your poems..keep it up=]

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Your poems always make me say, "Awww!" out loud. Haha. I like how well the emotion in this piece is conveyed. It comes straight from the heart, and a strong impression of the persona is put across. Very nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aw.. im sorry i hope this isnt true.. its soo sad.. but still i LOVE it.. how you talk of such simple things.. like sending an email and running into an old friend.. its so natural and that makes the poem so much better.. you didnt try to add extra drama for effect.. you simply wrote you emotions and they were strong enough in themselves :D

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