I'll Tell You..

by WordsHurt   May 11, 2007


*I have written a poem after a very long time,so its not as good*

I'll Tell You...

...Of a boy i know
Known him for a while now
And,boy,is he sweet?
Makes me more than melt

...Of a boy i Like
Like him for awhile now
And,boy is he gorgeous?
Blew my mind!

...Of a boy who's my friend
Friend for a while now
And,Boy Is he understanding?
Has me in tears

...Of a boy who's my best friend
Bestfriend for a while now
And,Boy,can he make you laugh?
Has me in crying

...Of a boy I Love
love him for a while now
And Boy,Can he make you happy?
Has me going crazy

...Of a boy who loved me
Loved me only for a while
And,boy could he make me cry?
Had me howling in pain

...Of a boy i still love
Love him forever.
And, Boy, how he loves to hurt me?
Has me on a killing point now..

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  • 16 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    Couldnt have said it better myself

    i love the structure

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow, I really liked this. It had like a jumpy type of flow to it. Atleast that's how I read it.
    But great job...5/5
    ((Amber))

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Get writing more yoU!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Excellent piece of poetry you have here truely amazing and i found it quite good since you havnt written in awhile. Nice style well done with this. Great work~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "...Of a boy i know
    Known him for a while now
    And,boy,is he sweet?
    Makes me more than melt

    ...Of a boy i Like
    Like him for awhile now
    And,boy is he gorgeous?
    Blew my mind!"
    Excellent lines..Good opening and i loved the style u've used in this 1...great work..touching and powerful in it's own way,...kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

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