Tempted {Arcostic}

by WordsHurt   Jul 6, 2007


Terrific is her sweet poetry
Extraordinary is this young lady
My friend,My Sister,the Sweet lovely
Perfection pours from her body
Tiny little smile from her
Evaporates every sadness from me
Dear Temps,you are awesome

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Well..This isn't very good but i wrote this for my friend..Tempted..ha-ha shes awesome XD
I'm sorry If its bad temps :(

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    I loved it. Great job writting it. Keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I would say this is a great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Such a sweet poem.
    Really enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Hey darling,
    This was terrific! :D Both of you are so adorable, I'm really glad to see both of you writing a tribute for each other. It's so cute! (^^,) Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care. 5/5
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Aw this is so sweet tormy, i love the effort u used, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

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