Beautiful Lies

by WordsHurt   Jun 17, 2007


Here comes the rain
Drenched in my pain again
I wonder about our dances
In this same rain..

Its that starry night
Just Like the ones
when we lay under them
Counting eachother's heartbeat..

So Painful it is to see
Two lovers holding hands
Hugging so tight, Holding on so close
Unwilling to let eachother go..

Sitting on the park bench
Feeling your presence so strongly
I cry silent tears
Wishing to feel that soft touch..

Memories of lovely summer days
Feelings of love's first kiss
Electric waves of your touch
All are polluted by your beautiful lies..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Amazing poem so beautifully written cant wait toread more :)

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Ok... it's well written but bit vague...

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Wow its really good! I love it, the ending was perfect! keep it up! 5/5!

    My favorite stanza:
    Its that starry night
    Just Like the ones
    when we lay under them
    Counting eachother's heartbeat..

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem I enjoyed this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was beautiful Tormy. I really loved it. Such a simple breath taking piece which you portrayed with sheer emotions. From your older work you have definitly come a long way. Well done on writing such love poem of high standards amazing. ~mel

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